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Doug Nebeker ("Doug")
I'd be very grateful if anyone can spare a minute to critique my new(ish) web site: www.seareachsystems.com
Thanks in advance.
Thursday, May 09, 2013
It looks very basic and dated, which may be appropriate in a more conservative market.
I'm not really clear what you are selling or how it would work, so a page about "How it works" would be good (unless it is because I lack domain knowledge and it is obvious to people in the industry).
Friday, May 10, 2013
Hi Guy, this page:
should be part of the main nav bar (at least).
Actually, I would even suggest this content to be re-embedded into your homepage. Or even better, turn your PDF http://www.seareachsystems.com/docs/AIS%20Chronicle%20Brochure%20Iss%201R.pdf into an homepage.
I suggest not to expect visitors to ever open the PDF. Most of them won't be bothered in doing so.
For a niche market like your's, I believe it's OK to have a long detailed homepage with most of the content directly on it.
Joannes Vermorel - Lokad Sales Forecasting
Friday, May 10, 2013
I do not think your site look is "dated" or "basic". You are not selling your product to teen users. The look is just fine for your niche audience and the message is clear and effective even for a dummy reader like me.
I agree with Joannes: you shall move the content of your PDFs online. It is not just a question of opening them (chrome, for example opens PDF like a link), but of navigation and marketing: you shall know what your visitors look at and how long. But I would not not use long pages but sub-topics instead. Again the point is not navigation, but knowing what your visitors do.
As an alternative you can use slidng pages with JQuery (I see you already use it). By the way I also see you use GA. I would add Woopra to look step by step visitors in real time (it is free too) and - considering your niche market - why not revert their IP and make a cold call...
Also you are missing a "call to action", at least a phone to call or a form to capture contact information (there are better alternatives and I pretend to write an article on it - email me if you wish to be notified). Initially a "Call us ..." is just fine.
Friday, May 10, 2013
Thanks for posting a site that solves a problem I never knew existed. Looks like a very nichey but interesting product. TIL there is such a thing as an International Cable Protection Committee!
I think the site looks professional and solid; I couldn't spot any issues with it. It's not particularly flashy but I think that's OK, with this sort of thing, that would likely detract.
Here are a few fairly superficial comments:
1. Until one "gets" your company name, your URL looks like a misspelling of "search". Maybe it should have a hyphen, though, hyphens in URL's are kind of strange also.
2. All the birds in the boat picture makes it look untidy (in an otherwise pretty pristine page).
3. Your page left me wondering what "AIS" stands for.
4. I have no clue what your product costs.
5. The "download PC software" link doesn't seem to do anything, is it supposed to be a trial or something?
6. I find it slightly annoying when a site wants me to click a PDF brochure link. If it's worth saying, say it in the site, don't make me read a PDF. (I realize that's probably where you answer some of my questions).
7. On the other hand, I really appreciate it when sites link to their manuals the way you do. I reserve my disdain for PDF for sales / brochure-type documents only.
If you quoted the whole remark, then you'd see that you took me out of context, as I went on to say that may be appropriate in the kind of conservative environment that we are discussing.
Actually, I did write a suite of software for a submarine when I was a student, as I have posted about here in the past. It was for a Royal Navy nuclear submarine, to monitor certain classified aspects of the main steam line from the reactor. I seem to remember those Navy guys were quite happy with the modern look I gave them, but YMMV.
I will update the link in my sig once I launch my new startup. Not sure many people around here will like it though ;-)
To be fair, I have given positive feedback too, where a site and/or product looks good and when it looks bad, other people say so too. If it was me, I'd want honest opinions and I'm secure enough to know that I can't please everyone. As always, IMHO, YMMV, etc.
Thanks to everyone that has provided feedback, it's much appreciated. We've already implemented some of the suggestions.
BTW, our product has nothing to do with submarines (watercraft), it's a system for protecting submarine *cable*, that is, undersea telecomunications cables. Lots of info here in case anyone is interested: http://www.iscpc.org/
Saturday, May 11, 2013
It is true that I give good and bad feedback, when asked. It is also true that not everyone agrees with me. However, if you think I've been unfair in any feedback, good or bad, then I hope you'll let me know. I'm just trying to keep it real. Have a great day.
Oh, the page is a bit simple, i think you can add more sections to it, for example, add a section related to your clients comments and cooperation, and some big news or upgrade of your system, etc..
Make your homepage more attractive.
Here is my one-man business site - http://www.ilikemall.com , hope it can give you some tip, of course, i still need to improve my site's design.
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